WALT use detail to make my story interesting

The Wonder Tree

By:Brooklyn

The Wonder Tree I have a wonder tree.it actually is a secret location. It will look like a base it will have a gun and a telescope with a door. Oneday a gang came along and tried to get in but they could not get in. Then we came along and we scared them away. In writing i am learning to use detail to make my story interesting. I feel proud because i am a fast writer. I need to improve on getting better at proofreading.

Tēnā koutou katoa

Tēnā koutou katoa,

Ko _mt wellington te maunga

My mountain is…

Ko _tamaki te awa  

My river is…

Ko _lambert te iwi

My tribe is…

Nō new zealand ahau

I’m from…

Kei Pakuranga toku kainga inaianei

I now live in

Ko lambert taku ingoa whanau

My family name is…

Ko shaiden taku papa

My dad is…

Ko kellyn taku mama

My mum is…

Ko Brooklyn taku ingoa

My name is…

Ko _elm park taku kura

My school is…

E 7 aku tau

My age is…

Nō reira, tēnā koutou, tēnā koutou, tēnā tātou katoa.

Therefore, greetings to you, greetings to you, greetings to us all.

WALT making connections

Alison Wendlebury
In reading I am learning to make connections. I feel proud because I am a really fast reader. I need to improve on reading and understanding difficult words.

Self Portrait

WALT make connections in the text.

WALT make connections in the text.

Write 2 Sentences about something this story reminds you of.

1.every Tuesday i make dinner.

2.me and my cousins eating soup together.

How did this story make you feel?

1.hungry.

Reflection:Its kind of easy because I have done lots of things in my life to connect with text.

WALT add by splitting numbers into parts.

WALT add by splitting numbers into parts. 

I found splitting numbers into parts hard because i hadn't done this work before.