Monday, 30 May 2016

WALT use detail to make my story interesting

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The Wonder Tree
By:Brooklyn
The Wonder Tree
I have a wonder tree.it actually is a secret location.
It will look like a base it will have a gun and a telescope with a door.
Oneday a gang came along and tried to get in but they could not get in.
Then we came along and we scared them away.
In writing i am learning to use detail to make my story interesting.
I feel proud because i am a fast writer.
I need to improve on getting better at proofreading.


Tuesday, 17 May 2016

Tēnā koutou katoa

Tēnā koutou katoa,


Ko _mt wellington te maunga
My mountain is
Ko _tamaki te awa  
My river is
Ko _lambert te iwi
My tribe is…


Nō new zealand ahau
I’m from…


Kei Pakuranga toku kainga inaianei
I now live in


Ko lambert taku ingoa whanau
My family name is…


Ko shaiden taku papa
My dad is…
Ko kellyn taku mama
My mum is…
Ko Brooklyn taku ingoa
My name is…
Ko _elm park taku kura
My school is…


E 7 aku tau
My age is…
Nō reira, tēnā koutou, tēnā koutou, tēnā tātou katoa.

Therefore, greetings to you, greetings to you, greetings to us all.

Monday, 16 May 2016

WALT making connections

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Alison Wendlebury
In reading I am learning to make connections. I feel proud because I am a really fast reader. I need to improve on reading and understanding difficult words.

Tuesday, 10 May 2016

WALT make connections in the text.

WALT make connections in the text.


Write 2 Sentences about something this story reminds you of.
1.every Tuesday i make dinner.


2.me and my cousins eating soup together.


How did this story make you feel?
1.hungry.

Reflection:Its kind of easy because I have done lots of things in my life to connect with text.

Friday, 6 May 2016

WALT add by splitting numbers into parts.

WALT add by splitting numbers into parts. 

I found splitting numbers into parts hard because i hadn't done this work before.